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    need some criticized input please.

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    • Drizzel
      Drizzel last edited by

      As far as I've understood, you want some design feedback on these graphics, right?
      Did you design these graphics yourself? If not, this might be a bit too detailed, sry

      General feedback

      • all designs are really well recognisable
      • every color scheme is good
      • not a single flaw in the perspectives
      • you repeat that they're icons. If they're going to be shown in a small size, they might be too detailed

      Rune Stone

      • I love the design
      • if you want to minimalise it, get rid of the grey scratches (not the black cracks)

      Common Sword

      • I dunno, but I'd assume that a common sword would neither have a gem inlay nor a fancy hilt and guard (after all it's a golden color)
      • if you want to minimalise it, get rid of the scratches.
      • the dents look awesome

      Short bow

      • What you show here is a long bow, a short bow usually has a recurve in order to deliver greater power (check out recurve bows)
      • the wrapping fits the sword handle, nice touch

      Attributes:

      • Amazing looking
      • already quite minimal, since there's no scratches
      • absolutely no more improvement suggestions

      spell book icon

      • looks great
      • maybe a bit to detailed (depends on how large it is when shown in your rpg)
      • maybe add some shadows around the rune stones to add depth, they are weirdly flat right now

      barrel

      • good color scheme, but I'd darken the wood colors to a walnut color, looks more aged interesting

      mana potion

      • darken the cork, otherwise the design is great
      • no need to minimalise

      health icon

      • too detailed, get rid of the "HP"
      • the ouch and scratches in the top left are a nice touch.
        *maybe replace the patches with the scratches from the top left, and leave the top left empty

      ruby garnets

      • look amazing, perspective is well done
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      • stephen
        stephen @Drizzel last edited by stephen

        @Drizzel THANK YOU this is exactly the kind of respone im hoping for from anyone who participates 😊🤓

        ys im having to do all aspects of this game, programing, art, dialouge, quest lines ect... but on my way im going to also be giving back to the community "barebone" scripts to help others. like openworld even handler, quest system, combat system ect...

        im going to look into your suggestions and ill post updated concepts for public reviewthank you!

        ##updated..

        and the reason for some of the extra detail, not counting tiny scratches, is compensation for resizing they start out as 4000pxx4000px and after processing they end up around 150ptx150pt the process i use is actually prety effective heres a example of a 6kx6k down to 1kx1k

        HD 6k to 1k

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        • Drizzel
          Drizzel last edited by

          Did you draw them on an iOS device? If yes, which app did you use? I'm rather intrigued because Vectornator (what I'm using) is good, but certainly not perfect.

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          • cvp
            cvp @stephen last edited by

            @stephen said:

            my problem with that is i need them to be scene.Textures..

            You can convert a sgv to an ui.Image via

            
            import os
            import ui
            
            w = ui.WebView()
            fpath = os.path.expanduser('~/Documents/test.svg')
            w.load_url('file://'+fpath)
            w.present('sheet')
            
            with ui.ImageContext(w.width, w.height) as ctx:
            	w.draw_snapshot()
            	ui_image = ctx.get_image()
            ui_image.show()
            
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            • stephen
              stephen @cvp last edited by

              @cvp dos this preserve alpha?

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              • stephen
                stephen @Drizzel last edited by

                @Drizzel said:

                Did you draw them on an iOS device? If yes, which app did you use? I'm rather intrigued because Vectornator (what I'm using) is good, but certainly not perfect.

                on iPad Air2
                sketch
                Draw
                vectornator

                most of it is hand painted and with Draw you can use brushes to draw vectors but vectornator give beter control of the vertices.. and the export scaling helps alot
                y process for drawing usually goes...
                Adobe Sketch ⇒ AdobeDraw for base structure
                Adobe Draw ⇒ Adobe Sketch for detailing
                Adobe Sketch ⇒ Vectornator for finalizing and export.

                you can also save to creative cloud on vectornator to combine all three for pretty good workflow

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                • cvp
                  cvp @stephen last edited by

                  @stephen said:

                  dos this preserve alpha?

                  No idea at all. I just thought a little time to find a solution svg -> ui.Image

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                  • stephen
                    stephen last edited by

                    @cvp thank you! when i get back to the animation system ill rewrite the texture cache and see if i can get that to work

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                    • stephen
                      stephen @cvp last edited by

                      @cvp said:

                      @stephen said:

                      my problem with that is i need them to be scene.Textures..

                      You can convert a sgv to an ui.Image via

                      
                      import os
                      import ui
                      
                      w = ui.WebView()
                      fpath = os.path.expanduser('~/Documents/test.svg')
                      w.load_url('file://'+fpath)
                      w.present('sheet')
                      
                      with ui.ImageContext(w.width, w.height) as ctx:
                      	w.draw_snapshot()
                      	ui_image = ctx.get_image()
                      ui_image.show()
                      

                      all i get is a white rect from this 😕

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                      • cvp
                        cvp @stephen last edited by

                        @stephen For me it is ok for a static svg but white rectangle if animated svg, what you did not yet ask at this moment 🙄

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                        • cvp
                          cvp @stephen last edited by cvp

                          @stephen UIWebView does not support animated svg but SFSafariViewController does

                          See my script and for instance

                          	main('https://codyhouse.co/demo/animated-svg-icon/index.html') 
                          
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                          • stephen
                            stephen @cvp last edited by

                            @cvp

                            here is the same file im testing with. and the mage should have transparency

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                            • cvp
                              cvp @stephen last edited by cvp

                              @stephen increase the frame and it is ok

                              import os
                              import ui
                              
                              w = ui.WebView()
                              w.frame = (0,0,500,500)
                              fpath = os.path.expanduser('~/Documents/svg-test.svg')
                              #fpath = os.path.expanduser('~/Documents/test.svg')
                              w.load_url('file://'+fpath)
                              w.present('sheet')
                              
                              with ui.ImageContext(w.width, w.height) as ctx:
                              	w.draw_snapshot()
                              	ui_image = ctx.get_image()
                              	ui_image.show() 
                              

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                              • stephen
                                stephen @cvp last edited by

                                @cvp

                                awesome didnt think about the frame. but sadely i seem to lose the alpha transparency. im sure i can go through the process of adding one but at that point id have to change format and then i lose the perks of vector graphics. plus id have to run the add alpha process to a library of images for the game and that seemsnlike a bad idea lol. thank you tho for checking it out for me 😊

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                                • cvp
                                  cvp @stephen last edited by

                                  @stephen transparency works

                                  import os
                                  import ui
                                  
                                  v = ui.View()
                                  v.frame = (0,0,500,250)
                                  v.name = 'with or without opacity=0'
                                  
                                  w1 = ui.WebView()
                                  w1.frame = (0,0,250,250)
                                  html = '''
                                  <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
                                  <!DOCTYPE svg PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD SVG 1.0//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-SVG-20010904/DTD/svg10.dtd">
                                  <svg xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" width="304" height="290">
                                  	<path d="M2,111h300 l-242.7,176.3 92.7-285.3 92.7,285.3z"
                                  	fill="#FB2" stroke="#B00" stroke-width="4" stroke-linejoin="round"/>
                                  </svg>
                                  '''
                                  w1.load_html(html)
                                  v.add_subview(w1)
                                  
                                  w2 = ui.WebView()
                                  w2.frame = (250,0,250,250)
                                  html = '''
                                  <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
                                  <!DOCTYPE svg PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD SVG 1.0//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-SVG-20010904/DTD/svg10.dtd">
                                  <svg xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" width="304" height="290">
                                  	<path d="M2,111h300 l-242.7,176.3 92.7-285.3 92.7,285.3z"
                                  	fill="#FB2" stroke="#B00" stroke-width="4" stroke-linejoin="round" fill-opacity="0"/>
                                  </svg>
                                  '''
                                  w2.load_html(html)
                                  v.add_subview(w2)
                                  
                                  v.present('sheet')
                                  
                                  #with ui.ImageContext(w.width, w.height) as ctx:
                                  #	w.draw_snapshot()
                                  #	ui_image = ctx.get_image()
                                  #	ui_image.show() 
                                  

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                                  • stephen
                                    stephen last edited by

                                    @cvp ya you are creating the opacity programaticaly (if thats the right term here lol ) where in my image it is solid where it should have a 50% alpha that i set in third party editor.

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                                    • cvp
                                      cvp @stephen last edited by

                                      @stephen I don't know anything about it but it is only to show that WebView supports opacity in static svg...

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                                      • cvp
                                        cvp @stephen last edited by cvp

                                        @stephen how are sure that your file test-svg.svg is half transparent?

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                                        • stephen
                                          stephen last edited by

                                          gotcha thank you @cvp 🙃

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                                          • cvp
                                            cvp @stephen last edited by cvp

                                            @stephen sorry, I don't understand What you mean

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