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    • OkieWolf
      OkieWolf @ccc last edited by OkieWolf

      @ccc

      I’m attempting to rewrite my code to be more efficient and am utilizing a couple of code snippets that a couple of you have supplied. However, in the below code I noticed that the output is 0.0 if both inputs happen to be the same number. I’m not understanding why.

      def button3_tapped(sender):
      	hypotenuse = float(v['hypotenuse'].text or 0)
      	short = float(v['short'].text or 0)
      	long = float(v['long'].text or 0)
      	if len([x for x in (hypotenuse, short, long) if x]) != 2:
      		v['mess'].text = "Enter two fields"
      		v['mess'].background_color = 'red'
      		v['mess'].text_color = 'white'
      		return
      	if hypotenuse:
      		if short and not long:
      			v['long'].text = str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - short ** 2))
      			v['long'].text_color = 'green'
      		elif long and not short:
      			v['short'].text = str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - long ** 2))
      			v['short'].text_color = 'green'
      	else:
      		v['hypotenuse'].text = str(math.sqrt(short ** 2 + long ** 2))
      		v['hypotenuse'].text_color = 'green' ```
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      • ccc
        ccc last edited by ccc

        if both inputs happen to be the same number

        if hypotenuse:
            if short:
                The rules of math say that the hypotenuse must be greater than short.
            else
                The rules of math say that the hypotenuse must be greater than long.
        else:
            short could be the same number as long  # <-- this is the only instance where both inputs could be the same number
        
        if hypotenuse and (short >= hypotenuse or long >= hypotenuse):
            raise ValueError("Not allowed by the rules of math.")
        
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        • OkieWolf
          OkieWolf last edited by

          Agreed. It works fine if short and long are the same number, which equals 45 degrees.

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          • OkieWolf
            OkieWolf last edited by OkieWolf

            Here’s what I came up with. It’s much shorter and easier to understand and I GREATLY appreciate all the help and patience.
            This version does all the other one did plus more. This version will calculate the other side and angle based on two sides input and can now calculate any side of the triangle based on angle and any one of the three sides.

            def button3_tapped(sender):
            	hypotenuse = float(v['hypotenuse'].text or 0)
            	short = float(v['short'].text or 0)
            	long = float(v['long'].text or 0)
            	angle = float(v['angle'].text or 0)
            	if len([x for x in (hypotenuse, short, long, angle) if x]) != 2:
            		v['mess'].text = "Enter two fields"
            		v['mess'].background_color = 'red'
            		v['mess'].text_color = 'white'
            		return
            	if hypotenuse and not angle:
            		if short and not long:
            			v['long'].text = str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - short ** 2))
            			v['long'].text_color = 'green'
            			v['angle'].text = str(math.degrees(math.asin(short / hypotenuse)))
            			v['angle'].text_color = 'green'
            		elif long and not short:
            			v['short'].text = str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - long ** 2))
            			v['short'].text_color = 'green'
            			v['angle'].text = str(math.degrees(math.acos(long / hypotenuse)))
            			v['angle'].text_color = 'green'
            	else:
            		if not angle:
            			v['hypotenuse'].text = str(math.sqrt(short ** 2 + long ** 2))
            			v['hypotenuse'].text_color = 'green'
            			v['angle'].text = str(math.degrees(math.atan(short / long)))
            			v['angle'].text_color = 'green'
            		
            	if angle:
            		angle = math.radians(angle)
            		if short and not long and not hypotenuse:
            			v['hypotenuse'].text = str(short / (math.sin(angle)))
            			v['hypotenuse'].text_color = 'green'
            			v['long'].text = str(short / (math.tan(angle)))
            			v['long'].text_color = 'green'
            		elif long and not short and not hypotenuse:
            			v['hypotenuse'].text = str(long / (math.cos(angle)))
            			v['hypotenuse'].text_color = 'green'
            			v['short'].text = str(long * (math.tan(angle)))
            			v['short'].text_color = 'green'
            		elif angle and hypotenuse and not long and not short:
            			v['short'].text = str(hypotenuse * (math.sin(angle)))
            			v['short'].text_color = 'green'
            			v['long'].text = str(hypotenuse * (math.cos(angle)))
            			v['long'].text_color = 'green' 
            
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            • ccc
              ccc last edited by

              Please put the trailing three backticks on a line all by themselves.

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              • OkieWolf
                OkieWolf @ccc last edited by

                @ccc
                Done

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                • ccc
                  ccc last edited by

                  OK. Now it is time to separate the business logic from the UI representation. We would need to put all the math logic in a function of the form:

                  def triangle(a, b, hypotenuse=0, angle=45):
                      pass  # math logic goes here
                  

                  Where triangle(3, 4) returns (3, 4, 5.0, 45)
                  Where triangle(3, 0) would raise ValueError()

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                  • JonB
                    JonB last edited by

                    It seems to me you could also dispense with most of the long / short specific logic, and just compute the other edge, then figure out which one is the long vs short after the fact.

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                    • OkieWolf
                      OkieWolf @ccc last edited by OkieWolf

                      @ccc

                      Please explain

                      def triangle(a, b, hypotenuse=0, angle=45):
                          pass  # math logic goes here
                      Where triangle(3, 4) returns (3, 4, 5.0, 45)
                      Where triangle(3, 0) would raise ValueError() 
                      
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                      • ccc
                        ccc last edited by

                        This was an invitation for you or someone else to write a function that can take between 2 and 4 parameters and calculate all other variables or raise an exception if there is no possible solution. This function would allow us to isolate all UI operations from all math operations. It would make it easier to test our math operations without the UI and would allow us to easily port the math operations to a different platform.

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                        • OkieWolf
                          OkieWolf @ccc last edited by OkieWolf

                          @ccc

                          Below will calculate short and long with given hypotenuse and angle but you have to enter zero for short and long input.

                          import math
                          
                          def triangle(short, long, hypotenuse, angle):
                              pass  
                              if hypotenuse and angle:
                              	angle = math.radians(angle)
                              	print ('Short = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.sin(angle))))
                              	print ('Long = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.cos(angle))))
                              	
                          triangle(0,0,10,30)
                          
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                          • OkieWolf
                            OkieWolf @ccc last edited by

                            @ccc

                            This will calculate any side or angle. But input still has to be zero for unknowns at input.

                            import math
                            
                            def triangle(short, long, hypotenuse, angle):
                                pass
                                if len([x for x in (hypotenuse, short, long, angle) if x]) == 2:
                                	if hypotenuse and angle:
                                		angle = math.radians(angle)
                                		print	('Short = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.sin(angle))))
                                		print	('Long = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.cos(angle))))
                                	elif long and angle:
                                		angle = math.radians(angle)
                                		print	('Short = ' + str(long * (math.tan(angle))))
                                		print	('Hypotnuse = ' + str(long / (math.cos(angle))))
                                	elif short and angle:
                                		angle = math.radians(angle)
                                		print	('Long = ' + str(short / (math.tan(angle))))
                                		print	('Hypotnuse = ' + str(short / (math.sin(angle))))
                                	elif hypotenuse and short:
                                		print ('Long = ' + str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - short ** 2)))
                                		print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.asin(short / hypotenuse))))
                                	elif hypotenuse and long:
                                		print ('Short = ' + str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - long ** 2)))
                                		print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.acos(long / hypotenuse))))
                                	elif short and long:
                                		print ('Hypotenuse = ' + str(math.sqrt(short ** 2 + long ** 2)))
                                		print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.atan(short / long))))
                                else:
                                	print ("ERROR")
                            
                            triangle(5,0,10,0) 
                            
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                            • ccc
                              ccc last edited by ccc

                              Step 0: drop the pass line.
                              Step 1:

                                  if len([x for x in (hypotenuse, short, long, angle) if x]) != 2:
                                      raise ValueError("Exactly two parameters must be zero.")
                              

                              Step 2: change triangle() so it never prints but instead returns the answer with the statement return short, long, hypotenuse, angle
                              Step 3: change triangle(5,0,10,0) to print(triangle(5,0,10,0)).

                              Step 1: is called a fast-fail which is safer and more readable than failing later in the function. Basically is says "I see a bad situation (bad input data) so I am going to raise an exception and stop processing".

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                              • mikael
                                mikael @ccc last edited by

                                @ccc, I am sure I just saw you using count somewhere:

                                if (hyp, ...).count(0) != 2:
                                    raise ...
                                
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                                • OkieWolf
                                  OkieWolf @ccc last edited by OkieWolf

                                  @ccc

                                  I don’t understand step 2

                                  Step 2: change triangle() so it never prints but instead returns the answer with the statement return short, long, hypotenuse, angle.

                                  Are you wanting me to change....
                                  def triangle(short, long, hypotenuse, angle):

                                  Also, changing to print(triangle(5,0,10,0)) adds “none” after returned values

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                                  • ccc
                                    ccc last edited by ccc

                                    def triangle(short, long, hypotenuse, angle):
                                        # Your code goes here...
                                        # Your code contains no print() calls.
                                        return short, long, hypotenuse, angle
                                    
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                                    • cvp
                                      cvp last edited by cvp

                                      Your code contains no print() calls, like

                                              if hypotenuse and angle:
                                                  angle = math.radians(angle)
                                                  short = hypotenuse * math.sin(angle)
                                                  long  = hypotenuse * math.cos(angle) 
                                      
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                                      • OkieWolf
                                        OkieWolf @cvp last edited by

                                        @cvp

                                        I still don’t know what you’re wanting. My code has many print calls.
                                        Adding return short, long, hypotenuse, angle where you have it above won’t do anything because it’s part of the last elif. If I add it in line with def Tringle it errors.

                                        import math
                                        
                                        def triangle(short, long, hypotenuse, angle):
                                            pass
                                            if len([x for x in (hypotenuse, short, long, angle) if x]) == 2:
                                                if hypotenuse and angle:
                                                    angle = math.radians(angle)
                                                    print   ('Short = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.sin(angle))))
                                                    print   ('Long = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.cos(angle))))
                                                elif long and angle:
                                                    angle = math.radians(angle)
                                                    print   ('Short = ' + str(long * (math.tan(angle))))
                                                    print   ('Hypotnuse = ' + str(long / (math.cos(angle))))
                                                elif short and angle:
                                                    angle = math.radians(angle)
                                                    print   ('Long = ' + str(short / (math.tan(angle))))
                                                    print   ('Hypotnuse = ' + str(short / (math.sin(angle))))
                                                elif hypotenuse and short:
                                                    print ('Long = ' + str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - short ** 2)))
                                                    print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.asin(short / hypotenuse))))
                                                elif hypotenuse and long:
                                                    print ('Short = ' + str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - long ** 2)))
                                                    print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.acos(long / hypotenuse))))
                                                elif short and long:
                                                    print ('Hypotenuse = ' + str(math.sqrt(short ** 2 + long ** 2)))
                                                    print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.atan(short / long))))
                                            else:
                                                print ("ERROR")
                                        
                                        triangle(5,0,10,0)  
                                        
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                                        • cvp
                                          cvp @OkieWolf last edited by

                                          @OkieWolf I understand, I only want to show what @ccc adviced. The triangle code without any print and only one print of triangle results

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                                          • OkieWolf
                                            OkieWolf @cvp last edited by OkieWolf

                                            @cvp

                                            I think I understand now. But I can’t get the indentation at “return” to stop erroring.

                                            import math
                                            
                                            def triangle(short, long, hypotenuse, angle):
                                                if len([x for x in (hypotenuse, short, long, angle) if x]) != 2:
                                                    raise ValueError("Exactly two parameters must be zero.")
                                                if hypotenuse and angle:
                                                	angle = math.radians(angle)
                                                	print	('Short = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.sin(angle))))
                                                	print	('Long = ' + str(hypotenuse * (math.cos(angle))))
                                                elif long and angle:
                                                	angle = math.radians(angle)
                                                	print	('Short = ' + str(long * (math.tan(angle))))
                                                	print	('Hypotnuse = ' + str(long / (math.cos(angle))))
                                                elif short and angle:
                                                	angle = math.radians(angle)
                                                	print	('Long = ' + str(short / (math.tan(angle))))
                                                	print	('Hypotnuse = ' + str(short / (math.sin(angle))))
                                                elif hypotenuse and short:
                                                	print ('Long = ' + str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - short ** 2)))
                                                	print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.asin(short / hypotenuse))))
                                                elif hypotenuse and long:
                                                	print ('Short = ' + str(math.sqrt(hypotenuse ** 2 - long ** 2)))
                                                	print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.acos(long / hypotenuse))))
                                                elif short and long:
                                                	print ('Hypotenuse = ' + str(math.sqrt(short ** 2 + long ** 2)))
                                                	print ('Angle = ' + str(math.degrees(math.atan(short / long))))
                                              return(short, long, hypotenuse, angle)
                                                	
                                            #triangle(5,0,10,0) 
                                            
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